作为副词使用的「comparing with (to)」也是经常被误用的短语,下面就是几个典型的英文论中误用的实例及其修正。
[误]Comparing tothe previous results, the present results are much more complete.
[正]The present results are much more completethanthe previous results.
[误]Comparing withthe thermal velocity, u is quite small.
[正]In comparison withthe thermal velocity, u is quite small.
上述两个误用例都是语法上的错误。
「comparing with (to)」是作为一个整体副词起作用,其中让人注意的是「comparing」是以现在分词的形式出现在分局句首。一般的话,现在分词出现的分句放在句首的时候,它的后面的句子(主句)的主语和分句的主语必须一样(不一样的时候,分词叫做「悬垂分词」)上述2个误用例中,现在分词或者说动词「comparing」的主语,说的是「人」(比如「we」或者「I」),而它们接下来的主语分别是「results」和「u」。现在分词的主语和它后面的主語不一致,所以导致使用语法上的错误。
下面是「comparing with (to)」的正确使用方法举例。
[正]Comparing withthe observation for Titan, we identify the following discrepancy.
[正]However,comparing tothe unfiltered sample, we can show that our treatment is useful.
上述两个例子语法上虽然正确,但下面的例子「comparing」与介词「with」或「to」之间,把比较的对象直接目的语加上,表达上会更加自然。
[正]Comparingthe present observationswiththe observation for Titan, we identify the following discrepancy.
[正]However,comparingour sampletothe unfiltered sample, we can show that our treatment is useful.
化学论文中的「comparing with (to)」的使用举例
This result could be rationalized bycomparingthe NMR conformations of the cis and trans isomerswiththe X-ray structure of a non-switchable cyclic RGD-pentapeptide bound to integrin. 引用:10.1039/c1cs15023e
The products were identified bycomparingthe GC-MSwiththat of the authentic samples. 引用:10.1021/ja1058247
The origin of the effect of leaving group on ee was revealed bycomparingthe stoichiometric reactions of the sodium enolate of R-methyl tetralonewiththe arylpalladium bromide and iodide complexes. 引用:10.1021/ja074453g
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